the graph below shows the percentage of part _time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart below depicts the proportion of part-time employees in several countries of the United Kingdom in the span of 30 years. Namely England, Northern
Ireland
, Wales
and Scotland.
Overall
, it can be seen from the graph that Wales
had the highest percentage of part-time workers, both in 1980 and 2010.
In the initial year, Wales
had the most employees working in a part-time job with more than 30% of the population. This
is then
followed by England with around 25%. The third place then
filled with Northern Ireland
with roughly 15% of its citizens. Then
, the last
position was Scotland with merely over one-tenth of the people.
Furthermore
, each country experienced an increase except for Northern Ireland
. In the next 30 years, Wales
's proportion rose slightly and consistently leading to approximately 35%. England still holds the second place with over 5% of increment. Moreover
, Scotland beat Northern Ireland
and got placed in third place with a quite dramatic rise, around 10% addition. Finally
, in contrast
, Northern Irelan had a minor depletion with about a 2% decrease.Submitted by elissa223 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ireland, wales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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