Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local costum and behavior others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural difference Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Public concern regarding travellers’

attitude

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is increasingly topical since some individuals argue that tourists should obey to rules

consisted

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in the

host

country

,

in contrast

, the rest of them believe that the

host

country

should

be opened

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their

eye

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to respect other

culture

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. In response to

this

aforementioned issue, I will give both

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and convince

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the visitors have to follow the hosts’ rules.

Firstly

, welcoming foreigners to the

country

has beneficial impacts

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citizens’

live

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. The reason is that they can spend their money to purchase

good

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and services

while

travelling. The more they use budgets to get something offered in the

host

area, the more dollars can be received by local people.

Therefore

, it leads to

increase

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economic

condition

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and

give

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local people

better

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life.

However

,

this

point of view is misleading because some tourists do not follow the instructions stated in the

regulation

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or in the

custom

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,

they

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and they

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tend to

make

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troubles

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in some areas. Take Indonesia as one example, CNN reported that some foreigners departed from Bangladesh

carry

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their extended family to Bali for business

purpose

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and

becoming

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competitor

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for local

business

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businesses

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.

This

activity Government’s regulation

which

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restricts individuals

embarking

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from embarking

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Indonesia

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on Indonesia

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without any permission. Th

On the other hand

, obeying the hosts’

regulation

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has a positive development for visitors

due to

the easier journey.

Firstly

, studying

native

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their native

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language makes them closer to

the

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society and get some benefits,

such

as affordable

price

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prices

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in

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some souvenirs or services.

In addition

, respecting local people will protect them from harassment and rejection.

To sum up

, even though the

host

country

should respect foreigners’

custom

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, they still need to obey the rules

due to

their easier journey,

for instance

increasing networking and avoiding

problem

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problems

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.