Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local costum and behavior others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural difference Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Public concern regarding travellers’
attitude
is increasingly topical since some individuals argue that tourists should obey to rules Fix the agreement mistake
attitudes
consisted
in the Verb problem
apply
host
country
, in contrast
, the rest of them believe that the host
country
should be opened
their Wrong verb form
open
eye
to respect other Fix the agreement mistake
eyes
culture
. In response to Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
this
aforementioned issue, I will give both perspective
and convince Change to a plural noun
perspectives
that
the visitors have to follow the hosts’ rules.
Correct pronoun usage
them that
Firstly
, welcoming foreigners to the country
has beneficial impacts in
citizens’ Change preposition
on
live
. The reason is that they can spend their money to purchase Replace the word
lives
good
and services Fix the agreement mistake
goods
while
travelling. The more they use budgets to get something offered in the host
area, the more dollars can be received by local people. Therefore
, it leads to increase
economic Wrong verb form
increased
condition
and Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
give
local people Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
better
life. Add an article
a better
However
, this
point of view is misleading because some tourists do not follow the instructions stated in the regulation
or in the Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
custom
, Fix the agreement mistake
customs
they
tend to Correct word choice
and they
make
Verb problem
cause
troubles
in some areas. Take Indonesia as one example, CNN reported that some foreigners departed from Bangladesh Fix the agreement mistake
trouble
carry
their extended family to Bali for business Wrong verb form
carrying
purpose
and Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
becoming
Wrong verb form
to become
competitor
for local Fix the agreement mistake
competitors
business
. Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
This
activity Government’s regulation which
restricts individuals Correct pronoun usage
apply
embarking
Change preposition
from embarking
Indonesia
without any permission. Th
Change preposition
on Indonesia
On the other hand
, obeying the hosts’ regulation
has a positive development for visitors Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
due to
the easier journey. Firstly
, studying native
language makes them closer to Correct pronoun usage
their native
the
society and get some benefits, Correct article usage
apply
such
as affordable price
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
in
some souvenirs or services. Change preposition
of
In addition
, respecting local people will protect them from harassment and rejection.
To sum up
, even though the host
country
should respect foreigners’ custom
, they still need to obey the rules Fix the agreement mistake
customs
due to
their easier journey, for instance
increasing networking and avoiding problem
.Fix the agreement mistake
problems
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Structure
Ensure that the essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The introduction should clearly state the topic and the writer's opinion. The conclusion should summarily address the points discussed and restate the writer's position.
Cohesion
Use cohesive devices to link ideas and paragraphs logically. This can include conjunctions, discourse markers, and lexical phrases that show comparison, contrast, addition, etc.
Support
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Task Response
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Accuracy
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