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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
#bar #ten #countries #production #consumption #electricity
The bar charts depict the information
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the
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electricity
production
 and
consumption
 in 2014 in
top
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the top
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 ten
countries
 in the world.
Overall
, the expenditure and
production
electricity
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of electricity
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 in all
countries
 is relatively equal.
Nevertheless
, there was a country
which
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in which
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 the level of
consumption
 the
electricity
 was higher than the
production
. In terms of the
countries
 which
consumption
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 and
production
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electricity
, China and
United
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the United
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 States
plays
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dominant
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a dominant
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 of
electricity
 compared to other
countries
 which at least double
amount
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the amount
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. The
electricity
 for those
countries
 spent more than 3.000
kWh
 and
produce
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produced
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 around 4.000
kWh
.
Furthermore
, there were seven
countries
 which presented a similar value.
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 average the
production
 of
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electricity
higher
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 than the
consumption
 of
electricity
. The
production
 of
electricity
 in the range
485
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of 485
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kWh
 to 1.057
kWh
.
Therefore
, the
consumption
 of
electricity
 a slightly low
at
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starting from 449
kWh
 to 1.038
kWh
.
Nevertheless
, Germany
which
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spent of the
electricity
 a little bit
higher
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 at 582
kWh
 than the
production
 at 526
kWh
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, consumption, countries, kwh with synonyms.
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