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electricity

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production

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and

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in 2014 in

top

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ten

countries

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in the world.

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, the expenditure and

production

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electricity

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of electricity

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in all

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is relatively equal.

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, there was a country

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in which

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the level of

consumption

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the

electricity

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was higher than the

production

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. In terms of the

countries

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which

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consumption

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and

production

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of

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electricity

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, China and

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the United

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States

plays

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dominant

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a dominant

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of

electricity

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compared to other

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which at least double

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. The

electricity

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for those

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spent more than 3.000

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and

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around 4.000

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.

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, there were seven

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which presented a similar value.

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average the

production

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of

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electricity

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higher

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than the

consumption

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of

electricity

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. The

production

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of

electricity

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in the range

485

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of 485

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kWh

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to 1.057

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.

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, the

consumption

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of

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a slightly low

at

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apply

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starting from 449

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to 1.038

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.

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, Germany

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spent of the

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a little bit

higher

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at 582

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than the

production

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at 526

kWh

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.