The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram contains a procedure that demonstrates how to produce smoked
fish
for consumers. Generally speaking, Use synonyms
it is clear that
there are 13 steps total, which are organized into 3 major phases. Linking Words
Fish
is first caught from the ocean, Use synonyms
then
processed, and Linking Words
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finally
the finished product is released onto the market.
Add a comma
finally,
Fish
is first brought to the port by being caught in a fishnet at sea. To maintain freshness, all Use synonyms
fish
should be immediately frozen and placed in an icebox. Use synonyms
Fish
should be thawed before being transported to the land, Use synonyms
then
washed in freshwater that could be moved in the following steps. Linking Words
The next step is
to remove all debris from the Linking Words
fish
so they can later cut them open. Use synonyms
However
, they must be submerged in saltwater, and the Linking Words
fish
will be arranged in rows inside a container. The smoked Use synonyms
fish
will Use synonyms
then
be simultaneously frozen and kept either in the warehouse or the store, repeating the process. The truck eventually grabs up the goods and provides the smoked Linking Words
fish
to various retail stores.Use synonyms
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