the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

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the several steps and some devices to

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production

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cement

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and after that,

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production

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concrete

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from produced

cement

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. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that

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production

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cement

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is used

almost

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five stages and in the later step, produced

cement

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is mixtured with some ingredients for

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production

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of

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.

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with, limestone and clay put on the surface screens to

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powder through

crusher

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the crusher

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. After that, they transferred to

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for mixing together. In the next stage,

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fire

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into the rotating heater, the mixed material

passed

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on and poured

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the flat screen. Ingredients passed into

grinder

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the grinder

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and

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become

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.

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, produced

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is packaged. As can be seen, in the next step, to

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concrete, produced

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with some additional materials, as water, sand, and gravel, are mixed with appropriate

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in the Concrete mixer,

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with

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15%, 10%, 25%, and 50%, respectively.