The line graph shows the number of books borrowed from four libraries in the mouths of June, July, August and September of
the line chart illustrates the total number of books borrowed from four libraries between
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west eaton and church mount have the lowest number of borrowed books in Change the capitalization
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, they all experience a steady increase from Change the capitalization
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ryeslip has Change the capitalization
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highest
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has fluctuations throughout the recorded periods.
the largest quantity of books borrowed was 300 in Use synonyms
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ryeslip
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sutton
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wood
respectively.
west eaton and church mount had two identical numbers 50 for Use synonyms
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these were Change the capitalization
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also
the lowest in those months.
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had variances starting at 250 for Use synonyms
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then
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increase in Correct article usage
a gradual
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plummeting to 100 in Correct your spelling
thereafter
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had a sharp increase to 300 at joint top recording.
in comparison rye slip had a gradual decline from Change the capitalization
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begining
at 300 and ending at 160.
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book
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books
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