The line graph shows the number of books borrowed from four libraries in the mouths of June, July, August and September of
the line chart illustrates the total number of books borrowed from four libraries between
june
and Change the capitalization
June
september
.
west eaton and church mount have the lowest number of borrowed books in Change the capitalization
September
june
and Change the capitalization
June
september
, they all experience a steady increase from Change the capitalization
September
june
to Change the capitalization
June
september
.
ryeslip has Change the capitalization
September
highest
quantity for Change the article
the highest
june
, Change the capitalization
June
thereafter
there is a steady decline till september
.
Change the capitalization
September
sutton
Change the capitalization
Sutton
wood
has fluctuations throughout the recorded periods.
the largest quantity of books borrowed was 300 in june
and Change the capitalization
June
september
at Change the capitalization
September
ryeslip
and Change the capitalization
Ryeslip
sutton
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Sutton
wood
respectively.
west eaton and church mount had two identical numbers 50 for june
and 150 for Change the capitalization
June
september
these were Change the capitalization
September
also
the lowest in those months.
on the other
hand
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hand,
sutton
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Sutton
wood
had variances starting at 250 for june
, Change the capitalization
June
then
gradual
increase in Correct article usage
a gradual
july
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July
there after
plummeting to 100 in Correct your spelling
thereafter
august
. Capitalize word
August
september
had a sharp increase to 300 at joint top recording.
in comparison rye slip had a gradual decline from Change the capitalization
September
june
to Change the capitalization
June
september
, Change the capitalization
September
begining
at 300 and ending at 160.
in Correct your spelling
beginning
conclusion
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conclusion,
rye slip
had the most number of borrowed Correct your spelling
Rye Slip
book
between the months followed by Fix the agreement mistake
books
Change the capitalization
Sutton
sutton
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Sutton Wood
wood
, west eaton
comes in third place and Correct your spelling
West Eaton
on
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in
last
position church mountSubmitted by mj on
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