Some people believe that free social service should be made compulsory for high school students. Do you agree or disagree?

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, individuals think that high school students must do social service for free. I completely with
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idea. The students need to be part of social
work
to increase
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awarness
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awareness
and perception and to make them feel they do something to their surroundings. On the one hand, the temptations are increased
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this
era, teenagers do
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a lot
of wrong
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actions
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like smoking,
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bullying
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, and bragging. So the
work
for free
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people feel about others.
Moreover
, all
student
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students
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will have
same
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duty and
then
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raise
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the humanity
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everyone and
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cooperation let them understand they make pleasure
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good
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way.
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, they
are
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not waste their time on bad
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, they just add something well
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their days. The volunteer
work
also
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students understand not everything you do
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to take
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refund, it
just
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to spend your expensive time
to learn
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something new and
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benefits to
community
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. Especially,
for example
, when
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the roads you do well
to
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community
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and you spend your time in
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way rather than smoking and
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yourself or others.
On the other hand
, it is important
to
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everyone to be part
on
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the community and
by make
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making
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higher school
student
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students
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work
with the
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,
this
essential thing to
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establish
them
to
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the
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life because after
thier
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their
stage will
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on
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this
life so that
nessessery
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necessary
to understand
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life and preparation them. Actually,
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teenagers have
diffirent
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different
view
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about the future and what they want to be after school. I think these activities may help them to understand their character well, without the possibilities of
thier
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their
parents.
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the end, in my opinion, the most crucial thing is to let everyone
work
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society
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benefit.
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