Nowadays many young people spend their free time in shopping centers. This has a negative effect on youths and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the era of technology,

bricks and mortar

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stores are opened in every city. Many

youngesters

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youngsters

spend their leisure

time

for

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apply

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buying goods and services. It is believed that it leads to some adverse factors both for generation and society.

However

, I concur with

this

phenomenon. To commence with, utilising excessive

time

on shopping means

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a wastage

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wastage

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waste

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of

time

and money. College students may lose their interest in studies which they ought to spend

for

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on

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education.

Thus

, it results in poor grades in academics.

Also

, if they visit the stores often, they will buy more fashionable products and electronic gadgets

on

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at

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higher

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a higher

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cost. Apparently, parents may

agression

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aggression

of youth for

demand

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the demand

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of

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non-important stuff

as well as

they will work hard to fulfil the

demad

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demand

demands

. Eventually, it can cause negative relationships under

same

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roof.

In addition

to

this

, higher production and demand

of

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for

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new items impact the environment because people will through the old material. In order to dispose

off

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of

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plastic,

mirror

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mirrors

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and biodegradables

factory

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factories

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will use more land

water

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and water

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and

also

burn the

stuuff

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stuff

.

Hence

, it will

results

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result

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into

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in

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harmful gases in the surroundings

also

animals can eat the un useful items and they will die

as a result

. In conclusion, young people are more shop holic these days owing to the internet. It has various hurdles for students,

environment

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the environment

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and society. After

an

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analysis it is seen that it causes damages to

time

, money

effect

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affect

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the relationships but if there will be

balance

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a balance

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between

time

spending it may prove beneficial for youngers.