Write a letter to your manager because you want to spend six months at the head office of your company in another country. in the letter explain why you want to do this say hor your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I apologize for the short notice and I wish I was able to speak to you in person. I will not be in a position to
attend going
to the office for the next six months Wrong verb form
go
due to
an unforeseen duty assigned to attend my job in the head office in another country. This
is a great chance for me to have the opportunitiy
to develop new skills and gain knowledge Correct your spelling
opportunity
to
Change preposition
of
home
office upon return.
Add an article
the home
Although
you should stay the course, I will be able to do remote work, and I already delegate some of my job
to my fellow in the current home projects. If you agree I will set up online meetings so that we would still be in updates and regular communication to stay aligned with our ongoing schedule. Perhaps I will need your assistance Change to a plural noun
jobs
on arrange
my departure. Thank you in advance
Yours sincerely, JonathanChange preposition
in arranging
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coherence cohesion
Begin with a more formal opening and clearly outline the purpose of your letter. Each paragraph should present one main idea clearly.
task achievement
You should fully develop your explanation about why you wish to spend six months at the head office and clarify how exactly your work can be managed in your absence, as this information is key to fully achieving the task.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.