IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

Percentage

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The percentage

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of

tourists

visited

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visiting

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Brighton attractions in England is described in the line graph above. Mentioned there are 4

kind

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kinds

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of amusement in Brighton, i.e. Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier, and Festival. Illustrated in

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the color

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color

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colour

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of

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apply

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blue, orange,

gray

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grey

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and yellow respectively. The chart

showed

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shows

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the number of

tourists

in 5 yearly from 1980 up until 2010. The most visited places are

differ

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,

started

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from the festival back in 1980 leading by 30%.

This

was the only time

tourists

visited

festival

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the festival

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the most, as we can see in the yellow line that after a slight decline in 1985, the numbers considerably stabile in approximately 25-28%. Followed by

art

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an art

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gallery, in 1985, there was a peak number of visitors enjoying the craft show. Leading in about 38% of the visitors, fairly contrast with other entertainment on the same year.

However

, the following year has been hard for the art gallery to

be

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become

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everyone's

favorite

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favourite

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. There was a significant decline by 1990 down to 20%,

proceed

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proceeding

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to a plateau in the next decade,

then

another

declining years

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decline

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until 2010.

Finally

, the most

enjoyed

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enjoyable

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part of Brighton was the Pavilion. Despite its own fluctuations number, it still

leading

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led

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up until 2010.

While

on the other side, Pier, was the least attraction visited by the

tourists

. That being said, Pier was consistently the least interesting side of

this

entertainment area.

While

Pavilion has been the

people

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favorites

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favorite

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since

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for

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the

last

two decades.