The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Answer:
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The bar chart illustrates the share of Brighton University
graduates
' occupation
in different categories in 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
occupations
Overall
, most students work in services industries and sports is the lowest sector. In addition
, there was not much of a difference between government, politics and
government and Education.
Correct word choice
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According to
the charts, around one third
of university Add a hyphen
one-third
graduates
worked in services industries in 2019. It is followed by three sectors
: Manufacturing industry, Politics and government and Education at 16,3%, 12,1% and 14,7%, respectively.
On the other hand
, the graduates
who work in the Transportation and Warehousing and science and technology sectors
have no significant gap between 7,8% and 7,3%, respectively. Then
, 5,6% graduates
were employed in the civil service and others at 2,8%. The two Change preposition
of graduates
sectors
that had the lowest job interest sectors
in 2019 were charity and sports at 1.3% and 0,1%, respectively.Submitted by sintakristiani22 on
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