WRITING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Grams per person per week Fish and meat consumption 300 250 200 50 150 大家 Chicken .com Beef 100 Lamb 50 Fish 0 1979 1984 1989 1994 1999 2004

WRITING

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Grams per person per week

Fish and meat consumption

300

250

200

50

150

大家

Chicken

.com

Beef

100

Lamb

50

Fish

0

1979 1984 1989 1994

1999

2004
The line chart illustrates a European country's consumption of fish, chicken, beef, and lamb from 1979 until 2004. Looking
from
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the data, chicken is the only kind of meat that has been experiencing a steady growth from over 200
grams
per
person
in 1979 to up to 250 in 2004.
Moreover
, chicken reached its peak
for
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at
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around 260
grams
per
person
in
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apply
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between 1999
to
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and
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2004. Contrary to the other three
meats
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types of meat
slices of meat
lumps of meat
portions of meat
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that have been always decreasing. Beef started very strong in 1979 with over 200
grams
per
person
, but drastically decreased until 2004. It is followed by the lamb starting at 150
grams
per
person
and
decreased
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decreasing
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until about 70
grams
per
person
. Fish remained in the
last
position with a fluctuating decrease until 2004.
Overall
, the consumption of meat in European countries is mostly experiencing a decrease.
Moreover
, the consumption of fish was steadily low from 1979 until 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, person with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.

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