The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph elaborates on the percentage of total drivers who got their driving license between 1980 and 2010 divided by gender. The data for women throughout the years shows fluctuating numbers
while
men
's had a stable increase. The thing that stands out the most is how both women and
men
in 1980 became the least of the population that passed the driving test where the data couldn't surpass 50% of the individuals. More than that, it is
also
obvious to see that females are more likely can drive than
men
.
This
is because the topmost number led the
overall
graphic in the year 2000 where it was nearly 70% of women could operate cars.
However
, there was a slight decline in 2010 that almost made the numbers hit 60%.
On the other hand
,
men
started with the lowest number in the
overall
chart with only almost 30% of the population.
However
, not like how the females' chart showed a decrease,
men
's showed an upward trend for each year until
finally
being tied in the two years. The peak years were in 2000 and 2010 when two of them placed the highest number with nearly 50% of males certified car drivers.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, overall".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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