The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram
given
illustrates the production process and Verb problem
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machineries
producing cement, Change the wording
machinery
types of machinery
pieces of machinery
while
the second one given
shows us Verb problem
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about
the quantity of cement making concrete for facilities and infrastructures. Change preposition
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Overall
, both processes look difficult and complex because both of them must have many numbers with right
proportions and many materials as well.
In the first process, they use two materials called limestone and clay and Correct article usage
the right
then
, they put them together into a machine and crush them into powder. After that, they take these to the mixer, go through a tube and come to rotating
heater. Add an article
the rotating
This
machine will be moved around and collabed
with the heat outside. They will become a purple Correct your spelling
collapsed
mixure
and the grinder will husk them. The final product will be grey and it will be put into bags and continued to make concrete.
After having the quantity of cements, they just use 15% of them and add water, sand and gravel with some specific proportions respectively 10%, 25% and 50%. Correct your spelling
mixture
Then
, they put them into a concrete mixer and Correct pronoun usage
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it
will be moved 360 degrees. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Finally
, we will have concrete.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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