The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above visualizes the data on annual fast
food
consumption amongst Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. The line graph gives information on three types of fast
food
,
such
as Pizza,
Fish&Chips
, and
Hamburgers
.
Overall
, the keenness of each kind of fast
food
has drastically changed over the course of 25
years
. As a starter, back in 1975,
Fish&Chips
was at the peak of its popularity having 100
consumers
at that time.
However
, the number of its eaters started getting lower in the following 5
years
. It momentarily regained its
consumers
in 1985, but Fish & Chips immediately experienced a consistently major drop after.
On the other hand
,
Hamburgers
gained significant growth in their frequency of being eaten by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 1985. It continued to gain more
consumers
in the following
years
. The number of times Pizza is being eaten
also
increased steadily over the
years
, going from 5
consumers
back in 1975 to 85 in 2000. To summarize,
Fish&Chips
were the most favoured fast
food
amongst teenagers in Australia in 1975,
while
Hamburgers
and
Fish&Chips
Correct your spelling
chips
were not very popular. Twenty-five
years
later, the order flipped. The latest data shows that the number of people eating
Hamburgers
in 2000 exceeds 100, with Pizza coming in second with approximately 85 people,
while
Fish & Chips had lower than 40.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, fish&chips, hamburgers, years, consumers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Consumption
  • Fast food
  • Australian teenagers
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Significant rise/decline
  • Compare
  • Contrast
  • Implications
  • Hamburgers
  • Pizza
  • Fish and chips
  • Data points
  • Period (time frame)
  • 25-year period
  • Paraphrase
  • Notable features
  • General increase
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