The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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briefly gives us information about the consumption of fast food by teenagers in Australia.

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, it only gives us reports in a certain timeline of 1975 to 2000. Prominently, the diagram gives us a glimpse

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the rise of

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starting to be eaten by teens over the years. In the following paragraph, I will give you an overview

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, we can tell

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fish

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and

chips

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were extremely popular during 1975

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a whooping consumption of 100 times per year.

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, pizza wasn't much in demand and

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eaten by children were only getting started back

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. In short, as the sales of

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and

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per year decreased from 1975,

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sold started increasing. The popularity of pizza grew much slower than

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before the 2000s.

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teenagers

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consuming less

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fish

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1975, it still had a peak

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1985, exactly 10 years after its highest sales in 1975.

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, in around 1987,

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numbers of

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and

fish

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and

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were taken by young ages.

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, you get a view of the introduction of new foods like

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, which unfortunately declines old fashioned foods like

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and

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in the population amongst kids.