The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts give information about the amount of electricity construction by fossil fuel in France during the two decades starting from 1990.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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at the beginning of the period, natural gas and coal were the largest segments
while
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the average slice was oil.
Conversely
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,
at the end
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of the time nuclear power became the most important division and the manufacturing of hydropower was the
last
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piece. Focusing on Natural gas and Coal, Natural gas comprised 28% in the first year and
this
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showed a sharp decrease of 24% to 4% and Coal went down suddenly from 28% to 13%.
Likewise
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, in 1990 oil used 22% which fell rapidly to 13% 20 years later. With regard to the
overall
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rate of Nuclear power, there was approximately a 50% rise till 2010.
On the other hand
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, hydropower declined slightly from 6% to 2%
at the end
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of the time.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end, overall".
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • electricity production
  • fuel source
  • nuclear power
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • oil
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • biomass
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant change
  • trend
  • distribution
  • energy mix
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