In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Populated cities face plenty of issues,

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air pollution, lack of resources, and

homeless

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.

Thus

, there is an emergency situation, because

population

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at an alarming rate which should take into account finding a solution to overcome

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problem.

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and cons of the emigration to countryside. Moving to farmland compelling several advantages for people.

Due to

air and water pollution in

megacity

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, it will be a good opportunity for citizens to have a healthy lifestyle and a great distance

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contaminated

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region

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. It goes without saying that

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far from all those problems,

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as traffic

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,

along with

less stress and more mental health.

Moreover

, kids grow up safely.

Secondly

, the crucial trouble in metropolises will decline and there will be a balance between these two districts.

On the contrary

, some argued about its disadvantages too. It stands to reason that transferring all facilities and jobs to the small town will be challenging,

in addition

, it will cost more to provide the facilities in rural areas to meet their needs, and if some businesses and jobs stay in megacity, transporting translates into air pollution.

Secondly

, convincing people will be an obstacle in moving

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. The government should take into account

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may not intend to leave their

hometown

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. In conclusion, emigration idea has a wide range of benefits,

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example

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less contamination and

healthy

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life,

however

, it is not without its drawbacks, including

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energy and money to

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and

constructing

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all comforts.

Furthermore

, emigration on the spur of the moment causes to make complicated situations.

This

is why, the government should strike a balance in moving. Ultimately, the success of

this

opinion hinges on the ability and the performance of politicians to pave the way for emigrants.