The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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portrays

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the Norbiton industrial area in

the

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current condition and how it will be developed in the future. In general, there would be a major deconstruction in that place. Looking in more detail,

nowdays

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, there

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around 8 factories in the industrial area in Norbiton Town.

In addition

it is clear that

Norbiton's farmland

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in the north of the river and spreads out without separation. In the

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apply

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future, the factories will be replaced by some

housings

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housing

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, shops, and other public facilities

such

as medical

center

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centers

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and

playground

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playgrounds

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. The housing would

also

be placed next to the farmland. Other than that, the shop is going to be built around the

south west

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side

while

the playground will be located across the river.

Also

, the future development plans to build a school in the eastern part of the city.

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3 paragraphs

142 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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