The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps given
portrays
the Norbiton industrial area in Correct subject-verb agreement
portray
the
current condition and how it will be developed in the future. In general, there would be a major deconstruction in that place.
Looking in more detail, Change the word
its
nowdays
, there Correct the word
nowadays
is
around 8 factories in the industrial area in Norbiton Town. Change the verb form
are
In addition
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Norbiton's farmland Linking Words
locates
in the north of the river and spreads out without separation.
In the Wrong verb form
is located
next
future, the factories will be replaced by some Correct word choice
apply
housings
, shops, and other public facilities Fix the agreement mistake
housing
such
as medical Linking Words
center
and Fix the agreement mistake
centers
playground
. The housing would Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
also
be placed next to the farmland. Other than that, the shop is going to be built around the Linking Words
south west
side Correct your spelling
southwest
while
the playground will be located across the river. Linking Words
Also
, the future development plans to build a school in the eastern part of the city.Linking Words
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