The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiyon, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps given
portrays
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the Norbiton industrial area in
the
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its
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current condition and how it will be developed in the future. In general, there would be a major deconstruction in that place. Looking in more detail,
nowdays
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nowadays
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, there
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around 8 factories in the industrial area in Norbiton Town.
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,
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Norbiton's farmland
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in the north of the river and spreads out without separation. In the
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future, the factories will be replaced by some
housings
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housing
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, shops, and other public facilities
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as medical
center
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centers
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and
playground
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playgrounds
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. The housing would
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be placed next to the farmland. Other than that, the shop is going to be built around the
south west
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southwest
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side
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the playground will be located across the river.
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, the future development plans to build a school in the eastern part of the city.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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