The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how drinking
water
is produced in a town in Australia using collected rainwater. It requires a drain,
water
filter, storage,
water
treatment, and some chemicals. In general, each house collects rainwater using a drain and passes it through an underground pipe.
Then
the
water
passes through three steps( filtering, storage, and chemical treatment) to make the final product, drinking
water
. In the beginning, rainwater that falls from the rooftop is collected using a drain.
Then
it goes through an underground pipe to the
water
filter
process
. The filtering
process
helps remove unwanted impurities from
water
,
such
as sediment and
odor
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, to result in
better quality
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water
. Once the filtering
process
is done, the
water
is saved in the storage tank. After that, the
water
goes to the
water
treatment
process
. In
this
process
, the chemical properties are added to make sure that the
water
is drinkable. Once the
process
is finished, the
water
is ready to drink and distributed to every house using a pipe.
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