The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how drinking
water
is produced in a town in Australia using collected rainwater. It requires a drain, Use synonyms
water
filter, storage, Use synonyms
water
treatment, and some chemicals.
In general, each house collects rainwater using a drain and passes it through an underground pipe. Use synonyms
Then
the Linking Words
water
passes through three steps( filtering, storage, and chemical treatment) to make the final product, drinking Use synonyms
water
.
In the beginning, rainwater that falls from the rooftop is collected using a drain. Use synonyms
Then
it goes through an underground pipe to the Linking Words
water
filter Use synonyms
process
. The filtering Use synonyms
process
helps remove unwanted impurities from Use synonyms
water
, Use synonyms
such
as sediment and Linking Words
odor
, to result in Change the spelling
odour
better quality
Add a hyphen
better-quality
water
. Once the filtering Use synonyms
process
is done, the Use synonyms
water
is saved in the storage tank.
After that, the Use synonyms
water
goes to the Use synonyms
water
treatment Use synonyms
process
. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
process
, the chemical properties are added to make sure that the Use synonyms
water
is drinkable. Once the Use synonyms
process
is finished, the Use synonyms
water
is ready to drink and distributed to every house using a pipe.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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