The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
the two pie charts illustrate some implementation patterns in great
britain
in 1992.
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Britain
female
chose Non-manual Fix the agreement mistake
females
employment
.On other
hand indicators of manual and non-manual Correct article usage
the other
employment
for male
was almost equal.
Fix the agreement mistake
males
For instance
,the percentage
indicator of non-manual employment
in female
was 69 per Fix the agreement mistake
females
cent
and of these percentages twenty nine
per Add a hyphen
twenty-nine
cent
is managerial and professional , 31 per cent
is clerical or related, nine
per Correct word choice
and nine
cent
is other non-manual.In comparison
the Add a comma
comparison,
percentage
indicator of non-manual in male
was 48 per Fix the agreement mistake
males
cent
.
However
, manual
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the manual
a manual
percentage
in male employment
is 52 per cent
, it
is higher than Correct pronoun usage
which
female
manual Correct article usage
the female
percentage
is thirty nine
per Add a hyphen
thirty-nine
cent
.Actually,the percentage
of male indicator employment
is 24 per cent
for craft or similar, two per cent
for general labourers,26 per cent
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