The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT
PERCENTAGE
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THE PERCENTAGE
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OF
LAST
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YEAR SAME DAY
OVEMIGHT
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OVERNIGHT
STAYS IN PUBLIC
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PRICES HOSPITALS ( LIKE SAME AUSTRALIAN STATES AS TABLE ABOVE ) AS CAN BE SEEN FROM
TABLE
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THE TABLE
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, THE SLIGHTLY DIFFERENT INFORMATION ABOUT
TWO
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THE TWO
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TYPES OF HOSPITALS WHICH IS VARIES CONSIDERABLY . ONE CLEAR EXAMPLE IS NEW SOUTH WALES IN PUBLIC GENERAL HOSPITAL CONSISTS
5,016
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OF 5,016
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PATTERNS
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PATIENTS
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IN THEIR HOSPITAL BUT SAME CITY A PRIVATE GENERAL HOSPITAL REPORTED
THAT
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apply
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2,017
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OF REPORT.
HOWEVER
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,
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IS REVERSED WHEN IT COME TO VICTORIA . PUBLIC PSYCHIATRIC IN VICTORIA CITY SHOWS
FIFTY NINE
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FIFTY-NINE
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THESE
PATTERNS
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CHANGED N PRIVATE PSYCHIATRIC REPORTED THAT 188
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words patterns with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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