Write a letter to the editor of newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers Offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article Write at least 150 words You do not need to write any addresses Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with reference to your article on
orientation
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of the town centres having striking resemblance.
This
encompasses the developments in
modern
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the modern
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era.
However
, historical places have their
on
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own
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ambience. As far as, the main boulevard is concerned renowned architects
desingned
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designed
modern, and spacious societies and business centres with
top notch
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infrastructure, and security, plenty of glass, tile, and marble work can be seen there.
On the other hand
,
walled
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a walled
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city is
an
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historic area
construction
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where construction
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was carried out
in
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between
11th
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the 11th
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to 18th
century
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where limestone and bricks are building blocks of heritage sites.
Therefore
, I would like
you
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to meet
you
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with some of my friends
,
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so that we can set a schedule to visit through walled city. Definitely,
this
will provide you
a
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unique
prespective
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perspective
.
Then
, you will be able to depict the complete picture. Thank you for your consideration. Ben
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each presenting a separate point or idea.
coherence cohesion
Within paragraphs, aim for clear and logical progression of ideas to enhance coherence.
task achievement
While you have addressed all parts of the task, make sure you elaborate equally on each. Expand on the points you agree with, describe the town center in further detail, and ensure your offer to give a guided tour is more prominent and detailed.
task achievement
Maintain a formal tone consistently throughout the letter as expected in such correspondence.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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