The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009.
The table illustrates how much time the UK unemployed spend in their free time in 14 different categories.
Overall
, it is clear, that housework by females in the morning is by far the highest amount in total.
To begin
with, in the morning men usually spend their time shopping and job hunting, while
ladies do the daily chores. Furthermore
, in the afternoon gentlemen are likely to do gardening and watch TV, in comparison with women
who mostly read and watch something on the TV.
Moreover
, in the early hours only 2 per cent of people drink, similar to women
since their numbers in the same category are only 1%. However
, in the afternoon 1% of men stay in bed, similar to women
due to
their amount being zero. Finally
, it is noticeable that women
's highest percentages are in the housework aspect also
in the morning and in the afternoon as well. On the other hand
guy's highest score is in job hunting and in the TV streaming categories.Submitted by palvdori on
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