The graphs below show the average daily hours of sunshine and the average monly temperature in Darwin and Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The table shows how
men
and women
who were out of work last
year spent their time. The information is broken down into parts of the day and fourteen different activities
.
First of all, it is interesting to note that the majority of both men
and women
who are unemployed are engaged in productive activities
in the morning with 61% of men
and 91% of women
either shopping, trying to secure employment or doing housework, with women
being twice as likely to do the latter in the afternoon. However
, figures for the afternoon show that the unemployed devote more time to leisure activities
such
as watching television, visiting friends or reading.
When looking at differences between genders it seems that men
were more likely to be engaged with
home improvement, gardening or active pursuits Change preposition
in
such
as walking or taking part in sports. More sedentary activities
such
as staying in bed or sitting around were similar for both sexes. Twice the number of men
than women
spent their time drinking but this
still only accounted for a very small proportion.
Overall
, it appears that contrary to many stereotypical preconceptions of the unemployed both men
and women
do spend a proportion of each day on productive tasks with their
being some interesting differences between genders.Correct your spelling
there
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