Many graduates want to start their first job in a big corporation. Many others prefer to work for a small company first. What are the different advantages in each decision?

Big

company

is more popular among a group of graduates as their first

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.

While

others choose a small business as their first

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experience. In

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will explain the benefits of working in

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different size of industry.

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establish corporations are more attractive among

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degree graduates because they believe that it will

brings

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several benefits.

Firstly

, corporate mostly has a

one year

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development program for new

employee

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employees

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and

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them a

taught

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about

working

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environment. Because the majority of students

are

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no clue about

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the field

and

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are strugling

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strugling

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struggling

to adapt.

Secondly

, big companies have a

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structure and clear career path.

As a result

, employees could feel safe and

job

stability because they

are not worry

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about their future.

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,

state owned

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company

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companies

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most likely open a big

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recruitment

every year and

the

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have a development program if they

accepted

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.

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kind of method

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proves

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that

employee

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employees

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can survive in

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the field

.

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working

small

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in small

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companies

also

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several merits. As the structure of the

company

are

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smaller which is

also

the number of

worker

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are less than 100,

employee

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employees

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with

an

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outstanding performance could get

promotion

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promotions

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faster and

increased

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their salary, because less of competition.

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,

this

size of

company

are

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more flexible, most

of

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the

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start-up companies

are

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give freedom for their

employee

to work out

from

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the office.

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,

the

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could reach a

work life

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balance easily. To illustrate, many start-up

company

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companies

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dont

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don't

have

an

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physical

offiice

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office

,

therefore

employee

could use their commuting time for doing sport at home. In conclusion, big

company

has

an

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advantages

such

as

job

stability and induction

program

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programs

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,

while

small

company

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companies

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are more flexible in terms of place and quick promotion.

Therefore

, on balance, the preference

of

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for

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job

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a job

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is depends

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of

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on

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the purposes

in

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each person.