The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graph depicts the data about the factors
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that led
led
to Change the form of the verb
leading
global
loss of Add an article
a global
the global
land
productivity,while
the table represents how these contributors had impact
on three areas namely North America,Europe and Oceania(Australia and New Zealand).
Add an article
an impact
Overall
,there are four sectors causing land
erosion which are overplanting crops,cutting down the trees,other factors and over-grazing.Another important point is that Europe`s lands were particularly affected from
the mentioned treatments.
Over Change preposition
by
one-thirds
of all causes Correct your spelling
one-third
was
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were
due to
over-grazing,another 30% caused
by logging the forests and 28% came from over-cultivation,Add a missing verb
was caused
remaining
7% was Correct article usage
the remaining
brought
by other factors.
About a quarter of total Verb problem
caused
land
in Europe was degraded as a consequence
of deforestation with 9.8% ,over-cultivation with 7,7% and over-grazing with 5,5% contribution making up 23%.However
,in Oceania
over-planting crops had no effect on Add a comma
Oceania,
land
degradation,while
logging the trees and over-grazing made 1,7% and 11,3% of the land
degraded accordingly
.In North America only 5% of the soil lost its productivity where 0,2% came from deforestation,3,3% from over-cultivation and 1,5% from over-grazing.Submitted by qodirxojaevizzat90 on
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