Tourism activities might influence cultural views from both the tourists and local citizens, whether it should be respected or whether it should be embeded with others. I personally think it is essential for both parties to show tolerance attitude towards each other differences.

Tourism activities might influence cultural views from

both

the tourists and local citizens, whether it should be respected or whether it should be embedded with others. I personally think it is essential to show

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tolerance

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attitude towards each other differences as it can enrich the knowledge for

both

parties. Showing respect to local cultures might be detrimental for visitors since it can

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their opportunity to learn those. Technically, when they

are showing

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appreciative signs to the natives regarding their

culture

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heterogeneity, it can encourage locals to

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tourists about their heritages. Take the example from my

last

visit to Bali, when I was showing some appreciation gestures toward Balinese dancers

such

as clapping my hands.

As a result

, one of the

dancer

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enthusiastically offered me a private lesson to do the dance movements when the show finished.

Therefore

, I think showing signs of appreciation

to

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another traditions

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must be embraced among visitors who travel overseas.

On the other hand

, the acceptance of heterogeneity values potentially drives indigenous

community

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to become adaptable. Certainly, acknowledging differences can

heightened

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the likelihood of natives to understand each characteristic from every

civilizations

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, even if several values or habits

are

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not align with theirs. It can be seen from recent phenomena when Korean waves

already

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received and valued among Indonesians because of their music delivery and style uniqueness, even though

at

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some aspects,

such

as wearing short clothes, might contradict with Indonesian lifestyle. From that statement, I personally think that

act

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openly to receive cultural variations benefits people in the host country as well,

thus

it is vital for

both

parties to be respectful toward each

others

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.

To conclude

, the advantages

from

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respecting each other's traditions might be helpful for

tourist

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tourists

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, since they

opportune

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to learn culture from the natives and for the host country, as it can enrich the knowledge

from

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local individuals,

hence

both

parties should be able to tolerate each characteristic toward each

others

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other

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.