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The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The given bar chart indicates the reasons
of
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for
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 trips to five
citier
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cities
 in the UK in 2013. As
it
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apply
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observed in the graph, compared percentage of
visitors
 in Birmingham, London,
Edinburgh
,
Liverpool
,
Manchester
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and Manchester
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. The main purpose for stopping was for holidays. The
city
 most frequently visited by tourists for vacation was
Edinburgh
while
 the least popular destination point was Birmingham.
Overall
,
according to
bar
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the bar
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chart
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chart,
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Liverpool
 ranked the highest in
terms
 of the
mumber
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number
 of
people
 visiting friends or relatives, which amounted to to approximately 28% of the total
visitors
 to the
city
. At the
sante
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same
time
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time,
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Liverpool
 took third place in
terms
 of arrivals of holiday tourists. More than 30%, of
people
 came there for
this
 purpose.
Edinburgh
 and London took first and second place in
terms
 of the number of
people
 being on vacation with 67% and 50% respectively.
However
, less than 20%
traveled
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travelled
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 to
Edinburgh
 to
tisit
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visit
 friends or relatives, which is the lowest indicator
for
this
 reason among all five cities. It is evident that Birmingham topped the chart of business trips. Around 50% of the total
visitors
 to the
city
 were on a mission. It was followed by Manchester with half as many (32%) employees coming to the
city
 for their work. A smallest
mumber ot
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number of
 business
visitors
 was in
Edinburgh
,
wich
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with
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 only 10% of
people
, which was almost five times less than the number of holidaymakers in
this
city
.
Overall
, there was a dramatic gap between all purposes of attending
Edinburgh
, except recreational
reason
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reasons
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, because in
terms
 of the number of
visitors
 for miscellaneous goals it
also
 took the lowest position with only 2% of
visitors
.
Nevertheless
, in
Liverpool
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Liverpool,
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 almost 20% of tourists had a variety of visiting purposes.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, edinburgh, liverpool, city, terms, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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