The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The two bar charts illustrate the UK
graduates
and postgraduates
' future decisions after leaving college in 2008, their choices were distributed by 4 conditions - being a part-time worker, voluntary worker, unemployment and going to further
study. Those who started full-time work
did not participate in the data collection.
Overall
, the trends of the two groups are quite similar, most of the students
in both groups wanted to continue studying and the minority of students
chose to become voluntary workers. However
, the sizes of the two groups are rather different, the number
of students
who were graduates
is far more than the students
who were postgraduates
.
It is clear that
the majority of graduates
, almost 30000 of them, greatly outnumbered their counterparts who ended up in the other three situations. In contrast
, only 3500 graduates
engaged in voluntary work
, making it the least common post-graduation destination. Moreover
, those who worked part-time and were unemployed were nearly the same in number
, at 17,735 and 1,6235 respectively, which were a little higher than the double of further
study.
Looking into the information for more details, the number
of post-graduate students
in each classification was nearly one-tenth of the number
of graduates
, except for people going on to work
part-time. There were 2,535 postgraduates
who started to work
as part-time workers. While
around 3000 postgraduates
continued being students
, the group of voluntary workers were still the smallest with 345 people and 1,625 postgraduates
were unemployed.Submitted by jasmine2001tw on
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