The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

The two maps show the changes before and after the development of

Norbition

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the Norbition

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industry

area

.

It is clear that

the purpose is to turn the

Norbition

industry

area

into a residential

area

that provides a complete living resource.  The first map reveals the current situation of

Norbition

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the Norbition

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industry

area

which is completely occupied by factories without any living

area

in it. 

However

, after development, as shown in the second map, all factories will be torn down and replaced with

housings

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housing

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and facilities that

needed

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are needed

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for daily life,

such

as

school

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schools

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,

hospital

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hospitals

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, shops, etc. Meanwhile, the roadways

also

become more accessible in all directions

by

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the layout of the buildings. To the north of the

factory

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factory,

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there is a river running through the entire

Norbition

industrial

area

. On the other side of the river, there is

a

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farmland

.

According to

the plan, a bridge will be built to connect the two sides of the river in the future, and the residential

area

will take the convenience and reach

to

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the other side. By

then

the

farmland

can coexist with the residential

area

.

Although

the

area

of

farmland

has shrunk, without the pollution from factories, the

farmland

will be better developed.