The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and theproportion of men and women who held them in 1999.Summaraise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the difference between the percentage of
females
and males in several post-school qualifications in Australia in 1999.
Overall
, females
had the highest share in two qualifications, on the other hand
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,
men
ranked first in three. In addition
, The highest numbers for women and men
were reported for undergraduate diplomas
and skilled vocational diplomas
, respectively.
Firstly
,there was a significant gap between the proportions of males and females
in skilled vocational diploma, with the former standing first with 90 %.Secondly
,the disparity between the two figures was almost the same for undergraduate diplomas
and postgraduate diplomas
.However
, while
in the former women had the highest share with 70%, men
accounted for the largest percentage in the latter with 70%.Females
also
ranked first in bachelor's degrees, whereas
the percentage of men
was lower by a narrow margin (55% and 45%, respectively).In contrast
, in the master's degree, the contribution of females
was 2\3 as high as that of males as the latter was responsible for the largest share with 60%.Submitted by dasfnma on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, men, diplomas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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