You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. This line graph shows the percentage of women who were employed in four countries from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. You should write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the

percentage

of

women

employed in

USA

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the USA

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, Korea, Afghanistan,

France

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and France

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during the period of twenty years, from 1985 to 2005. The United

states

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States

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number

of employed

women

rose steadily from 1985 to 2000. The

percentage

fell

down

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apply

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to 60% for the year 2005. In

Korea

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Korea,

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there was a slow increase in the

number

of employment for

women

. For ten years the

percentage

of employed

women

in Afghanistan

increases

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has increased

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. After 1995,

however

, there was a dramatic fall until the year 2000.

This

goes to

lowest

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the lowest

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point in 2005. France’s

percentage

of

the

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apply

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employed

women

declined to 32% in 1990,

then

begins

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began

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the rise continuously until 2005.

According to

the graph, the

number

of employed

women

for

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in

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every country showed an upward trend, except for Afghanistan. Among the four countries,

USA

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the USA

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and France represented the

higher

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highest

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number

for

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of

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women

employment,

while

Korea reached the highest point in the year 2005.