The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992
Some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992 are described by the two pie charts which
divided
by sex and occupation. Add a missing verb
are divided
For example
, about one in four (24%) of male employees crafted something or had the
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jobs
in comparison with female
.
The figures were 24 per cent and 3 per cent respectively. By the way, it is noticeable that Fix the agreement mistake
females
female
most often did the non-manual businesses. Just over Fix the agreement mistake
females
one third
(31%) of Add a hyphen
one-third
female
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females
the
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jobs
, whereas
only six per cent of male
chose Fix the agreement mistake
males
this
or related businesses. However
, these diagrams include the
similar patterns. Correct article usage
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For instance
, the features of the other manual and the non-manual jobs
. It is clear that
men did mainly the
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jobs
unlike
women.Add the comma(s)
, unlike
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