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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the
amount
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 of people in
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 to the current year with
forecasting
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a forecasting
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 to 2050.
Overall
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,
China
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 had a
lesser
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smaller
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population
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 in 2000 compared to
India
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, but it is predicted to have
more
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a higher
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population
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 than
India
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 after 2030.
India
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 showed an upward trend from 2000 to the current year, it is later predicted to have a decreased
population
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 after 2030.
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,
China
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's
population
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 had a stable
grow
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growth
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 from 2000 to
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the recent
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recent
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present
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. It is
also
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 projected to continue growing gradually until 2050.
India
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 started off with 1,250
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billions
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billion
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of
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people in 2000. It is forecast to reach a peak of over 1,400
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billions
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billion
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 of
population
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 between 2025 and 2030, before dropping progressively to below 1,400
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billions
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billion
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 in 2050.
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,
China
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 began with 1,000
population
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 in 2000. The
population
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grow
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has grown
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 steadily up to recent
year
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years
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. It is projected to climb consistently in the following years and hit a high of 1,600
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billions
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billion
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 of
population
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 in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, billions with synonyms.
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