You wish to study at a foreign university. Write a letter to the university. In your letter you should ask about: the accommodation and fees possible scholarships and the qualifications required for acceptance.

Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. My name is Vandana Tomer from India. I am writing
this
letter regarding an inquiry
of
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a course and accommodation in your university for international
student
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students
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. As
i
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did
Bachelor
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a Bachelor
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of Physiotherapy in India, I want to pursue my post-graduation in Exercise Sciences from your college. I need to ask some
question
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questions
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related to availability of the houses for
interntional
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international
students. Is
any
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there any
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in-campus residence in college or
we
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need to take it outside?
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Greeting and Closing
Ensure you have a clear structure with a greeting at the beginning and a closing sentence at the end. For example, you can start with 'Dear Admissions Officer' and conclude with 'I look forward to your response. Sincerely, [Your Full Name].
Logical Structure
Make sure to separate your ideas into clear paragraphs, with one paragraph for accommodation, one for fees, one for scholarships, and one for qualifications required for acceptance.
Complete Response
Address all parts of the task given. Your letter should ask about accommodation and fees, possible scholarships, and the qualifications required for acceptance. Make sure to cover all these points clearly in your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Fees
  • Tuition
  • Scholarships
  • Qualifications
  • Acceptance
  • International students
  • Course
  • Payment plans
  • Facilities
  • Eligibility
  • Enquiry
  • Dormitories
  • Language proficiency
  • Standardized tests
  • Campus
  • Inquire
  • Criteria
  • Assistance
  • Eager
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