you recently attended a meeting at a hotel.When yu returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter say where youy think you left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
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coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea. The middle paragraph mixes reasons for the documents' importance with the instructions for the manager, which should be separated.
coherence cohesion
Use accurate greetings and closings appropriate to the formality of the task. For a letter to a hotel manager, consider using 'Dear Hotel Manager,' or 'Dear [Manager's Name],' and closing with 'Sincerely,' followed by your full name.
task achievement
Complete the task by addressing all bullet points. Ensure you provide clear information about where you think the papers were left, why they are important, and what specific actions you want the manager to take.
task achievement
Maintain a suitably formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid casual phrases and ensure to use proper grammar and punctuation for clarity and professionalism.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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