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The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in million tonnes) in six different countries over twenty years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given figure illustrates how much
waste
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generated
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 in six
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nations over two decades. The quantity is expressed in
million
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tonnes
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the US experienced the highest amount of
waste
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 production over 2 decades,
while
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 Ireland was the least
of
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generatinge
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generating
waste
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.
Through Thru
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 the
two2
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two
 decades, the US
waste
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 production trend rose sharply from 131 to 192
million
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tonnes
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,
this
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 trend can be seen
also
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 in Japan which generated from 28 to 53
million
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tonnes
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 of
waste
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.
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 the other hand, Poland and Portugal share the same
trand
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trend
 which is slightly increasing from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 respectively. As seen in the figure, Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from the other
nation
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. The trend of Ireland and Korea
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fluctuated
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 over the twenty years.
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, Korea was the only nation that
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 decrease the amount of
waste
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 production
with
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 significantly
form
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from
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 31 to 19
million
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tonnes
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in
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 1990 to 2000.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • sharp rise
  • decline
  • stable
  • notable
  • peak
  • dip
  • consistent
  • variation
  • contrast
  • comparison
  • aggregate
  • metric
  • figure
  • volume
  • statistics
  • data points
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