The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the UK
travel
to other countries from the Change the verb form
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UK
. Meanwhile
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shows
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show
that
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apply
the
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UK
residents
.
At the begging
of the period (in 1979), the Correct your spelling
beginning
number
of people
who visited to
the Remove the preposition
apply
UK
was higher than the number
of the
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UK
residents
went
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who went
to
abroad by around 3 Remove the preposition
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million
. After that, the number
of the
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travelers
who have Change the spelling
travellers
the
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UK
nationality increased gently between 1979 and early 1984 to 20 million
. Meanwhile, at the same time, the UK
visitors barely went up to about 11 Correct quantifier usage
number of UK
million
. From middle
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the middle
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the second
1989
the Add a comma
1989,
number
of the UK
residents
who went to
abroad soared to 40 Remove the preposition
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million
. However
, the number
of foreigners who visited the UK
rose between 1989 and 1999, but it increased stably.
In 1999, the 53millions
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53 million
UK
people
visited a lot of countries. One of the most popular destinations of
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for
the
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UK
residents
was France. Around 12 million
people
visited that country. At the same time
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time,
million
people
visited Spain and 4, 3 and 2 million
people
traveled to USA, Greece, and Turkey respectively.
Overall
, at
the given periods, the Change preposition
during
number
of visits to the UK
people
was always lower than the number
of people
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UK
nationality travel to
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, the UK
people
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countries
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