The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.
There are diagrams that present the
water
supply system in Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
present
and in Change preposition
at present
future
. Both images have the same pointers, Use synonyms
such
as a thin arrow that Linking Words
presenting
the pure Wrong verb form
presents
water
, a white arrow that Use synonyms
presenting
the Wrong verb form
presents
Use synonyms
storm
Correct your spelling
stormwater
water
, and a black arrow that Use synonyms
presenting
the waster Wrong verb form
presents
water
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the illustrations start with a dam or storage, continuing to the households, shops, factories, and Linking Words
city
, to Use synonyms
Use synonyms
water
treatment plan, and the element below them is Add an article
the water
a water
Use synonyms
river
.
Add an article
a river
the river
According to
the data, the current Linking Words
water
supply system in Use synonyms
Australia
will allow the Use synonyms
water
from the dam to the Use synonyms
city
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the society can use the Linking Words
water
as they want, Use synonyms
for instance
Linking Words
is
the households that require Unnecessary verb
apply
water
for the family to take baths. Use synonyms
Further
, the Linking Words
waste
Use synonyms
water
from the location may transferred to the Use synonyms
water
treatment plant, Use synonyms
then
it will flow to the Linking Words
river
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
city
Use synonyms
also
produced Linking Words
a
Remove the article
apply
Use synonyms
storm
Correct your spelling
stormwater
water
that Use synonyms
will
eventually Wrong verb form
would
gone
to the Change the verb form
go
river
.
Use synonyms
In contrast
with the current system, the Linking Words
future
Use synonyms
water
supply mechanism in Use synonyms
Australia
will not allow any Use synonyms
water
to flow to the Use synonyms
river
. The Use synonyms
future
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
apply
the
tactics will Correct article usage
apply
go
smarter than the present Verb problem
be
one
because Correct pronoun usage
ones
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
makes
the Correct subject-verb agreement
make
water
recycled back to the Use synonyms
city
. To describe, the start of the Use synonyms
water
will go the same, from the storage to the people. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, both Linking Words
storm
and Use synonyms
waste
Use synonyms
water
will have a way to the Use synonyms
water
treatment plant, allowing them to restructure as Use synonyms
a
pure Remove the article
apply
water
, Use synonyms
grant
them to be used by the people in Correct word choice
and grant
Australia
.
In conclusion, there is a significant Use synonyms
different
between the present and Replace the word
difference
future
Use synonyms
water
supply Use synonyms
mechanism
in Fix the agreement mistake
mechanisms
Australia
. In the Use synonyms
future
, the Use synonyms
storm
and Use synonyms
Use synonyms
waste
Correct your spelling
wastewater
water
will be recycled as pure Use synonyms
water
, Use synonyms
hence
the people can Linking Words
consumed
them. Change the verb form
consume
Nevertheless
, it is a positive improvement that will implement the zero Linking Words
waste
of the Use synonyms
water
.Use synonyms
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