The diagrams below show the water supply system in Australia present and in future.

There are diagrams that present the

water

supply system in

Australia

present

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and in

future

. Both images have the same pointers,

such

as a thin arrow that

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the pure

water

, a white arrow that

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the

storm

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stormwater

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water

, and a black arrow that

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the waster

water

.

Furthermore

, the illustrations start with a dam or storage, continuing to the households, shops, factories, and

city

, to

water

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the water

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treatment plan, and the element below them is

river

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a river

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.

According to

the data, the current

water

supply system in

Australia

will allow the

water

from the dam to the

city

.

Moreover

, the society can use the

water

as they want,

for instance

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the households that require

water

for the family to take baths.

Further

, the

waste

water

from the location may transferred to the

water

treatment plant,

then

it will flow to the

river

.

However

, the

city

also

produced

a

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storm

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stormwater

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water

that

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eventually

gone

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to the

river

.

In contrast

with the current system, the

future

water

supply mechanism in

Australia

will not allow any

water

to flow to the

river

. The

future

of

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the

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tactics will

go

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smarter than the present

one

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because

it

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makes

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the

water

recycled back to the

city

. To describe, the start of the

water

will go the same, from the storage to the people.

Nonetheless

, both

storm

and

waste

water

will have a way to the

water

treatment plant, allowing them to restructure as

a

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pure

water

,

grant

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and grant

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them to be used by the people in

Australia

. In conclusion, there is a significant

different

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between the present and

future

water

supply

mechanism

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in

Australia

. In the

future

, the

storm

and

waste

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water

will be recycled as pure

water

,

hence

the people can

consumed

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them.

Nevertheless

, it is a positive improvement that will implement the zero

waste

of the

water

.