The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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There are two line charts that respectively illustrate the trends of the percentage of
households
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with electrical appliances and the number of hours of housekeeping per week, per household during the period of 1920 to 2019 in a particular country.
According to
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the first
chart
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, citizens generally rely on three electrical
machines
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to help with their housework,including washing
machines
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,
refrigerators
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and
vacuum
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cleaners
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. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is apparent that there was a dramatic increase in the proportion of
households
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who owned electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019,
on the contrary
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, the time that every week’s housework required for each household experienced a relatively steady decline during the same time.There is
also
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a noticeable change we can see from the first
chart
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that
initially
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washing
machines
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were in a dominant position
while
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refrigerators
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reached a bottom of 0% in 1920, but the situation totally changed
at the end
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of 2019
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the refrigerator became the most popular electric machine but
washing
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the washing
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machine was in the
last
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place. In the first
chart
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,
initially
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, the most popular electric appliance in 1920 was washing
machines
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(40%), followed by
vacuum
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cleaners
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(30%).
While
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the
refrigerators
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were put in the bottom
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nearly no
households
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were willing to choose it.
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, the percentage of the three ones all increased to a various degree but reached similar numerical value at about 50%~60% in 1940.In 1960,the percentage of washing
machines
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and
vacuum
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cleaners
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was the same at 70%, after that, the proportion of
vacuum
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cleaners
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and
refrigerators
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respectively soared by 30% and 20%.What is more, they all peaked at 100% and remained unchanged between 2000 and 2019, which left washing
machines
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far behind that they had a temporary drop from 1960 to 1980 by 10
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cent and only slightly increased by 10
per
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cent in the next 39 years.It is worth mentioning that a dramatic surge of 0% to 90% in the proportion of using refrigerator families took place during the decades(1920-1960),it kept increasing and eventually reached the peak of 100% in 1980 and remained unfluctuating in flowing 39 years. In the second
chart
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, the decade(1920-1960) witnessed a sharp decline in the amount of time spent doing housework for a week in
households
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from 50% to 20%, in the next 59 years(1960-2019), the number of hours of housework kept a relatively slight fall and reached a bottom of about 10% in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "initially, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, chart, machines, refrigerators, vacuum, cleaners with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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