The given pie charts compare the proportion of water consumption for various goals in six regions of the globe.

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The pie charts shown illustrate the comparison of the percentage of

water

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consumption for several purposes around the world. It can be seen that most regions mostly use

water

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for their agricultural needs. Several regions, namely South

America

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, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia, need

water

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mostly for their agricultural system ranging from 71% to 84%. Meanwhile, in North

America

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, nearly two-fifths of the

water

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go to

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agricultural industry and about one-third of the

water

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in Europe goes to the same use. In most of the area,

water

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for domestic use is not too high, ranging from 7% to almost

one-fifths

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one-fifth

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of the

overall

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percentage in South

America

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. The industrial need for

water

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however

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, showed the most prominent wants in North

America

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and Europe with around half of the

overall

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needs.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words water, america with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

133 words

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