You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter regarding an invitation for an

interview

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in college. My name is Jatinder Kumar and I have been asked for an

interview

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for teaching Business

Managment

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Management

course in your college and the

interview

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was

setuped

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setup

on upcoming Monday

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at 12

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pm.

Unfortunatelly

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Unfortunately

, I am not able to

attent

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attend

this

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interview

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because of my previous appointment with my doctor. I

am really apologise

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for delaying

this

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interview

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. I know, we already have made all the arrangements for

this

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interview

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but, We can postpone

for

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until

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the

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next day at

same

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the same

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time which we had arranged before, I have no

planes

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plans

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on Tuesday.

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, I have

couple

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a couple

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of questions in my mind regarding

this

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interview

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. Can you let me know how long

would

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apply

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be duration of

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interview

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the interview

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and

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if is

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there

test

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a test

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required for

this

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interview

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? Because I would prepare

my self

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myself

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for

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test. I hope you will

understant

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understand

my problem and reschedule my

interview

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as soon as possible. Your Faithfully, Jatin

Jatinderjass.jjSat Jan 20 2024

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph contains a single, clear idea and that transitions between ideas are smooth.

Task Achievement

Stick to a formal tone throughout the letter, avoiding informal phrases and maintaining a respectful and polite language.

Language

Check for spelling and grammatical accuracy. Practice writing complex sentences correctly and enhancing vocabulary.

Task Achievement

Try to fully address all parts of the task by expanding on each point. Give more depth to your explanations and requests.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

167 words

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