You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor: explain your position apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day. ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding an invitation for an

interview

in college. My name is Jatinder Kumar and I have been asked for an

interview

for teaching Business

Managment

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Management

course in your college and the

interview

was

setuped

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setup

on upcoming Monday

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at 12

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pm.

Unfortunatelly

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Unfortunately

, I am not able to

attent

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attend

this

interview

because of my previous appointment with my doctor. I

am really apologise

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for delaying

this

interview

. I know, we already have made all the arrangements for

this

interview

but, We can postpone

for

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until

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the

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next day at

same

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the same

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time which we had arranged before, I have no

planes

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plans

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on Tuesday.

Also

, I have

couple

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a couple

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of questions in my mind regarding

this

interview

. Can you let me know how long

would

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apply

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be duration of

interview

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the interview

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and

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if is

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there

test

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a test

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required for

this

interview

? Because I would prepare

my self

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myself

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for

this

test. I hope you will

understant

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understand

my problem and reschedule my

interview

as soon as possible. Your Faithfully, Jatin

Submitted by Jatinderjass.jj on Sat Jan 20 2024

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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