The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The picture gives information about the process of producing
electricity
from geothermal energy at geothermal
power plant. Add an article
the geothermal
a geothermal
Overall
, it can be seen that the process take
several steps from Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
water
injection into geothermal
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the geothermal
a geothermal
zone
to electricity
produced in generator
.
In the beginning, to produce Add an article
the generator
a generator
electricity
in geothermal
power plant, cold Correct article usage
a geothermal
water
from water
reservoir at the Correct article usage
the water
surface
is pumped down to geothermal
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the geothermal
zone
using the injection well. The injection well is 4.5 km long from the surface
to the geothermal zone
. In this
zone
, cold water
will be heated by the hot rocks and increase water’s
temperature. Correct article usage
the water’s
Then
, the hot water
is pumped up to the surface
using the production well.
Furthermore
, after reaching the surface
, hot water
turn
into steam in the condenser and it will rotate the turbine. Change the verb form
turns
This
turbine is connected to the generator. Kinetic energy from turbine
will Add an article
the turbine
transform
Wrong verb form
be transformed
to
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into
electricity
using generator
. The Add an article
a generator
the generator
electricity
will be delivered to the customer using tower
and cable.Correct article usage
a tower
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