The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity
The picture gives information about the process of producing
electricity
from geothermal energy at Use synonyms
geothermal
power plant. Add an article
the geothermal
a geothermal
Overall
, it can be seen that the process Linking Words
take
several steps from Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
water
injection into Use synonyms
geothermal
Add an article
the geothermal
a geothermal
zone
to Use synonyms
electricity
produced in Use synonyms
generator
.
In the beginning, to produce Add an article
the generator
a generator
electricity
in Use synonyms
geothermal
power plant, cold Correct article usage
a geothermal
water
from Use synonyms
Use synonyms
water
reservoir at the Correct article usage
the water
surface
is pumped down to Use synonyms
geothermal
Correct article usage
the geothermal
zone
using the injection well. The injection well is 4.5 km long from the Use synonyms
surface
to the geothermal Use synonyms
zone
. In Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
zone
, cold Use synonyms
water
will be heated by the hot rocks and increase Use synonyms
Use synonyms
water’s
temperature. Correct article usage
the water’s
Then
, the hot Linking Words
water
is pumped up to the Use synonyms
surface
using the production well.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, after reaching the Linking Words
surface
, hot Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
turn
into steam in the condenser and it will rotate the turbine. Change the verb form
turns
This
turbine is connected to the generator. Kinetic energy from Linking Words
turbine
will Add an article
the turbine
transform
Wrong verb form
be transformed
to
Change preposition
into
electricity
using Use synonyms
generator
. The Add an article
a generator
the generator
electricity
will be delivered to the customer using Use synonyms
tower
and cable.Correct article usage
a tower
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