The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table not only shows the
poverty
rates in different family types but also
provides the overall
rate
within all families.
Starting with those living as a couple, the rate
is strikingly 12% for couples
with children, which corresponds to nearly 50% of the total country's poverty
. For childless couples
, the rate
decreases to 7%, accounting for approximately 12% of the total country's poverty
. Among elderly couples
, the rate
drops to around 4%, marking the lowest rate
among couples
.
Looking at those living alone, single parents stand out with the highest rate
at 21%. For those who are single and childless, the poverty
rate
can be considered 19%. The combined share of these two groups in the total is calculated to be 32%. Elderly individuals living alone are presented in the table with a decreased rate
of 6%.
In conclusion, although
groups considered as single-family types have a higher percentage than those of couple family
types, their Add a hyphen
couple-family
overall
share is 35%, which is less. The rate
for couples
is calculated as 65%.Submitted by salihzekikoni on
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