The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts information about the correlation between age and
crime
in the UK
last
year,
while
the pie chart illustrates the percentage of four different crimes in the same country and year.
Overall
, it is noticeable that young people, 12 to 28
years
old, have the highest
rate
of
crime
,
while
children who are between 0 to 8
years
old have the lowest
rate
. It is
also
interesting to note that the highest proportion of
crime
that has been done is violence. In terms of
crime
rate
, youth who were about 21
years
old achieved a peak at 800000 activities as opposed to the babies and pupils under 9
years
old which contributed nothing. For elderly people, the
crime
rate
remained low approximately 100000 on average. With regards to the type of
crime
, violence has almost a half proportion at 46% compared to property
crime
which has nearly a quarter. In comparison with goods property, medicine
crime
has a slight discrepancy at 22%.
Furthermore
, public order
crime
was nearly one-fifth at just 9%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, years, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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