The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts information about the correlation between age and
crime
in the UK last
year, while
the pie chart illustrates the percentage of four different crimes in the same country and year.
Overall
, it is noticeable that young people, 12 to 28 years
old, have the highest rate
of crime
, while
children who are between 0 to 8 years
old have the lowest rate
. It is also
interesting to note that the highest proportion of crime
that has been done is violence.
In terms of crime
rate
, youth who were about 21 years
old achieved a peak at 800000 activities as opposed to the babies and pupils under 9 years
old which contributed nothing. For elderly people, the crime
rate
remained low approximately 100000 on average.
With regards to the type of crime
, violence has almost a half proportion at 46% compared to property crime
which has nearly a quarter. In comparison with goods property, medicine crime
has a slight discrepancy at 22%. Furthermore
, public order crime
was nearly one-fifth at just 9%.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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