The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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An island is described
in
maps, Change preposition
on
some
visitor facilities are added Correct word choice
and some
in
that place.
The diagrams illustrate the condition of an island before and after manufacturing of different basic requirements Change preposition
to
such
as,
reception area, cottages, tracks, paths and so on. Remove the comma
apply
In addition
, the place consists of 100 meteres
.
The first figure mentions the situation of an island which only Correct your spelling
metres
meters
contain
a beach or some bamboo trees. But in the second one, there Correct subject-verb agreement
contains
are
Change the verb form
is
development
of various luxuries for tourists. There is Add an article
the development
a development
also
availability of yachts by which they have access to the bridge, and it
attached Correct your spelling
is
with
the seashore. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, motor vehicle tracks are built which surrounds
the reception building and Correct subject-verb agreement
surround
the
leads toward Correct article usage
apply
restaurant
.
Add an article
the restaurant
Moreover
, basic requirements of rooms are also
fulfilled where they can spend time to get some rest. While
,
paths are formed throughout the accommodation area and Remove the comma
apply
then
it brings toward beach
. Swimming Add an article
the beach
spot
os Fix the agreement mistake
spots
also
available at beach point
.Correct your spelling
Beach Point
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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