The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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An island is described

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maps,

some

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and some

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visitor facilities are added

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that place. The diagrams illustrate the condition of an island before and after manufacturing of different basic requirements

such

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reception area, cottages, tracks, paths and so on.

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, the place consists of 100

meteres

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metres

meters

. The first figure mentions the situation of an island which only

contain

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contains

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a beach or some bamboo trees. But in the second one, there

are

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development

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the development

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of various luxuries for tourists. There is

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availability of yachts by which they have access to the bridge, and

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attached

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the seashore.

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, motor vehicle tracks are built which

surrounds

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surround

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the reception building and

the

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apply

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leads toward

restaurant

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the restaurant

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, basic requirements of rooms are

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fulfilled where they can spend time to get some rest.

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paths are formed throughout the accommodation area and

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it brings toward

beach

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the beach

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. Swimming

spot

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spots

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also

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available at

beach point

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Beach Point

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

154 words

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?