Some say job security is more important than job satisfaction. What is your opinion?

Some argue that feeling

secured

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is more crucial than feeling satisfied in

job

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a job

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. I think more considerations are needed before giving a final conclusion. On the one hand, some people value

job

security over the

satisfaction

of the

job

. They believe that

although

the

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satisfaction

can fuel passion

into

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in

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employees, giving them more

willing

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to work, the less security of stability and career paths can break down the initial motivation. They think that if these workers only

recieve

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receive

a

negilible

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negligible

negotiable

salary from their satisfied

job

, the financial difficulties could give them a sense of unease after all, which even make them resentful about their work. They might

also

claim even if the current stable jobs do not

fullfil

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fulfil

the worker's expectation, they could

ultilize

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utilise

their income to attain

satisfaction

from other activities. I believe that more factors need

taking

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into consideration before comprehensively evaluating

this

main claim, especially the current

situations

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of workers. If they are the

youngests

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youngest

, who have

less

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concerns about family and society, I encourage them to find their passionate

carrer

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career

, because humans are likely to feel fatigued when doing things that they do not have much motivation

, which

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ultimately deterioriate their mental health and

job

's effectiveness and even to be made abundant.

However

, if employees are those who have more problems

need

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to be addressed,

such

as raising their offspring, I think they should apply for a

job

that could help them make a living. In conclusion,

although

I acknowledge that financial stability is the main reason why some people

favor

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favour

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job

assurance over

job

satisfaction

, I believe the

prioprity

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priority

property

has a high dependence on personal circumstances.