You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. You should write at least 250 words.

It is important to have

a

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leisure

time

admist

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despite

the

day to day

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hustle of an

individula's

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individual's

life as it helps to improve

the

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mental health and

improve

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the

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creative skills.

However

, not everyone enjoys their 9-5 job,

hence

they have their favourite hobby to carry out during their leisure

time

or during the weekends.

Firstly

,

incoporating

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incorporating

reading, solving puzzles and playing any sport helps to promote the mental health of an individual and keeps the body fit as well.

This

will

further

encourage and enhance the mind to prepare for the following week of work.

For example

, a research study shows people working in IT day and night lead to various

health related

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problems. In order to avoid

such

difficlties

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difficulties

, employers are now forced by the government to give the

employee's

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frequent intervals between long hours of work.

Moreover

, they can

also

use

this

time

for utilizing the office's gym or

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time

reading a book.

Additionally

, it is always better to learn new skills which

further

will improve the career aspects and

helps

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help

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to make a passive income as well.

For example

, I read an article about a woman who won the title "Miss World",

although

she was a doctor by profession. She

further

said fitness has been her escape from her busy days at the hospital and

this

hobby motivated her to join the

pagent

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pageant

for the Miss World. In conclusion, having

a

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leisure

time

helps a person both physically and mentally

furthermore

reseting

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resetting

the mind.