The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
infographic shows
an information
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information
a piece of information
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about how to make electricity in the future. From the general overview, it can be seen that it has six steps until it
finally
can be used for home
energy
. First and foremost, the compost of ferments methane
gas
consist
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of leaves, food, scraps, etc will be gathered until it
filled
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fills
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3/4 of
steel
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the steel
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tank in order to transform the
gas
out into a methane
gas
storage by using a pipe.
This
process will continue to compress all the
gas
into the compressor machine until it is suitable enough to get processed by
combustion
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a combustion
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engine. In fact,
this
is the
last
moment the
gas
stays
to
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in
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its element.
Moreover
, the combustion engine machine will be the first mechanical process where the
gas
becomes
an
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apply
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energy
.
This
engine leads the
gas
out through the mechanical process and
change
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changes
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it into
a
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mechanical
energy
before it enters the generator system. After the mechanical
energy
has been generated and changed into an electrical
energy
in
generator
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the generator
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system, it will be allocated into a battery where the whole electric
energy
will be saved. More than that, the battery will distribute the electricity from the storage for home usage.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • renewable energy
  • sustainability
  • solar panels
  • energy storage
  • wind turbine
  • geothermal
  • energy efficiency
  • carbon footprint
  • grid
  • biomass
  • photovoltaic
  • smart meter
  • energy consumption
  • insulation
  • heat pump
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