The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
infographic shows an information
about how to make electricity in the future. From the general overview, it can be seen that it has six steps until it Remove the article
information
a piece of information
finally
can be used for home energy
.
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consist
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filled
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fills
steel
tank in order to transform the Correct article usage
the steel
gas
out into a methane gas
storage by using a pipe. This
process will continue to compress all the gas
into the compressor machine until it is suitable enough to get processed by combustion
engine. In fact, Add an article
a combustion
the combustion
this
is the last
moment the gas
stays to
its element.
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Moreover
, the combustion engine machine will be the first mechanical process where the gas
becomes an
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apply
energy
. This
engine leads the gas
out through the mechanical process and change
it into Change the verb form
changes
a
mechanical Remove the article
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energy
before it enters the generator system. After the mechanical energy
has been generated and changed into an electrical energy
in generator
system, it will be allocated into a battery where the whole electric Correct article usage
the generator
energy
will be saved. More than that, the battery will distribute the electricity from the storage for home usage.Submitted by writingielts0 on
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