The diagram shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
process
diagram illustrates different stages of the electrical energy manufacturing process
for home electricity using biomass products. Overall
from an overview perspective, we can see that there are five stages of electrical
Correct article usage
the electrical
power making
Add a hyphen
power-making
process
started
with composting fermentable ingredients and completed Wrong verb form
starting
at
electrical energy saved in Change preposition
with
battery
and ready to use.
Correct article usage
a battery
To begin
with, we need to fill 3/4
underground steel tank with compostable materials, Correct article usage
a 3/4
such
as leaves, food waste, scraps, and water. After several days, the materials inside the giant tank begin composted
and generate methane Change the verb form
to compost
gas
. The evaporated gas
filling
through the pipe inside the steel tank and out to the methane Wrong verb form
fills
gas
storage.
Afterwards, the biomass gas
is compressed out to
a combustion engine. The biomass Change preposition
into
chemically
processed by Add a missing verb
is chemically
burned
with oxygen and Add a missing verb
being burned
give
off heat at high Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
temperature
. Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
Next,
the mechanical energy produced from the combustion process
is moved into generator
and changed into electrical power. The electrical power is saved in Add an article
the generator
a generator
giant
battery and is ready to use for household electricity usage.Correct article usage
a giant
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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